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Aug 13, 2022Liked by Nick Cole, Single White Medusa

The wizard using smoke to tell his story is a very fun idea and well written. I'm hoping to see a map or two or a dozen as the tale progresses. Love me some maps!

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There will be maps.

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Aug 13, 2022Liked by Nick Cole, Single White Medusa

No offense, but I’d be a lot more able to refer the story to some others if it were it’s own thing.

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Aug 13, 2022Liked by Nick Cole, Single White Medusa

Brilliant. After chapter one, I was thinking “too close to Lord of the Rings”. Chapter 2 won me

over, and now I am hooked!

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Aug 12, 2022Liked by Single White Medusa, Nick Cole

Like the idea of the recipe, I baked a batch of cranberry crumble scones this week.

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Can you oust your recipe?

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Aug 12, 2022Liked by Nick Cole, Single White Medusa

Awesome.

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Aug 12, 2022Liked by Nick Cole, Single White Medusa

I am here for the full ride...all of it...Danger Zone!

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Aug 16, 2022Liked by Single White Medusa

a little odd on the smoke descriptors like 'angelic smoke' and 'continued smoke'. i was hoping that the smoke was actually in the shape of wings behind him or something.

different things bother me in the text and audio, but i'm sure it's all purposeful.

waiting for the smoke spell to charm all the halfmen (or strangle them).

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