The wizard using smoke to tell his story is a very fun idea and well written. I'm hoping to see a map or two or a dozen as the tale progresses. Love me some maps!
a little odd on the smoke descriptors like 'angelic smoke' and 'continued smoke'. i was hoping that the smoke was actually in the shape of wings behind him or something.
different things bother me in the text and audio, but i'm sure it's all purposeful.
waiting for the smoke spell to charm all the halfmen (or strangle them).
The wizard using smoke to tell his story is a very fun idea and well written. I'm hoping to see a map or two or a dozen as the tale progresses. Love me some maps!
There will be maps.
No offense, but I’d be a lot more able to refer the story to some others if it were it’s own thing.
Brilliant. After chapter one, I was thinking “too close to Lord of the Rings”. Chapter 2 won me
over, and now I am hooked!
Like the idea of the recipe, I baked a batch of cranberry crumble scones this week.
Can you oust your recipe?
Awesome.
I am here for the full ride...all of it...Danger Zone!
a little odd on the smoke descriptors like 'angelic smoke' and 'continued smoke'. i was hoping that the smoke was actually in the shape of wings behind him or something.
different things bother me in the text and audio, but i'm sure it's all purposeful.
waiting for the smoke spell to charm all the halfmen (or strangle them).